Tuesday, 19 July 2011

About Me

Hi everyone ,my name is Zhang Haoyue, you can call me Zhang or Alice.I'm from China .
I came to the camp because I want to study in the US after I graduate from my college. But now I find it's more interesting and happier there as I make friends with different people . All people here are lovely except a pity--my spoken English isn't good , so I always hasitate how to say the word I think . Finally , I say no word~T-T~ In fact I'm very friendly . I like taking photos and there are many beautiful secenery I take tonight . I like swimming .But for rhinitis , I can't swim well .And I can cook some Chinese food , like noodles dumplings and soup.^_^ If you come to Qingdao, China ,I can cook for you~
It's me -- a Chinese girl.

4 comments:

  1. Hi, Zhang!
    This is a wonderful post. Here are some suggestions for your writing.
    1. ...I want to study in the US...(Use the article 'the' before US.)
    2. ...spoken English isn't good...("Good" is an adjective modifying English.)This is a very tricky point.
    3. ...I can't swim well...(This is the correct usage.)

    I'm so sorry you have rhinitis! I hope you feel better soon!
    Grade for this post = 95

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  2. I have changed them. Thank you and I feel sorry about such silly problems like "can't swimming "

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  3. can you cook cookies??:D

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  4. I'm sorry that I can't....We seldom cook cookies at home....

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